Minggu, 03 Januari 2016



Definition Paragraph is about “Gong Dance”

Step 1

11.  Ledo Kancet dance or dance Gong is one of the Dayak traditional dances and dance also dance Gong is expressing about the tenderness of a woman.
22.  Dance Gong comes from East Kalimantan.
33.   Gong dance is very popular in Kalimantan, because dance is often performed at
traditional events or other events, but it also makes the popular clothes or tools used are very different that using a material made from animals such as necklaces made of manik- colored beads and teeth or fangs Tiger.
Step 2
Topic Sentence:
Dance Kancet Ledo also called dance Gong is one of the artistic expression of the dayak people who inhabit the East Kalimantan.

Supporting Sentence:
1. Dance gong is an expression of tenderness woman
  -This dance reveals the beauty, intelligence and gentle and dance movements in accordance
    with the name of the dance, the dance is danced on top of a Gong with gentle movement
    and the full balance Sapeq accompanied by musical instruments.
2.  Dancers Gong use beaded dress shirt and Taah form.
  -It is typical female clothing consisting of velvet fabric decorated with beads, which are
    used in a manner wrapped around the waist, which each end of the rope is wound and
   stopped at the navel and other equipment used Lavung and necklaces made of manik
   colored beads and teeth or fangs Tiger, and hornbill feathers are worn on both hands
   dancer.
3. Simplicity dance Gong seen in motion and music.
  -Motion on the dance Gong just a few segments of the body are moving, as well as the form
   of repetitive movements when the dancer towards Gong, while on and off of Gong Gong
   and Gong Dance also has a simple footwork in stride and swing the body and gentle hand.
4. The costumes used very luxurious.
  - That arena is made of beads strung into a motive - a motive animals like motif necklace
    pattern Aso music game that supports this dance accompaniment flat is not a change from
   the beginning to the end of the dance.

Concluding Sentence:
In cloncluding, Tari Gong is a dance that reflects the softness of a woman and also have beauty and intelligence.




Step 3
First Draf
Gong Dance


Dance Kancet Ledo also called dance Gong is one of the artistic expression of the dayak people who inhabit the east Kalimantan. Dance gong be an expression of tenderness woman. This dance reveals the beauty, intelligence and gentle and dance movements in accordance with the name of the dance, the dance is danced on top of a gong with gentle movement and the full balance Sapeq accompanied by musical instruments. Dancer gong use beaded dress shirt and taah form. It is typical clothes of women consisting of velvet fabric decorated with beads, which are used in a manner wrapped around the waist, which each end of the rope is wound and stopped at the navel and other equipment used lavung and necklaces made of beads colored and teeth or fangs tiger, and hornbill feathers are worn on both dencer hands. Simplicity dance gong seen in motion and music. Dance gong movement in only a few segments of the body are moving, as well as the form of repetitive movements when the dancer towards gong, while on and off of gong, gong dance also has a simple footwork in stride and swing the body and hands gentle. Costumes used very luxurious. That arena is made of beads strung into a motive - a motive animals like motif necklace pattern aso music game that supports this dance accompaniment flat is not a change from the beginning to the end of the dance. In cloncluding, Tari Gong is a dance that reflects the softness of a woman and also have beauty and intelligence.


Note:

Tari Kencet ledo            : one of the traditional dance from Central Kalimantan.
Gong                              :  is one of the traditional musical instrument Dayak Kalimantan art
Sapeq
                             : is a musical instrument that is plucked like a harp
Taah
                               : It is a typical female clothing consisting of velvet decorated beads
Lavung
                           : is a hat made of rattan and there are motifs in accordance with  style
                                         clothes and Taah
Aso necklace
                  : is a necklace made of materials of a dog or dragon
beaded                            : is a glittering beads jewelry that adorn the costume





























3 komentar:

  1. I think it be better if you add a statement "When is the time usually are people there showing this dance ?" For example : "This dance usually shows every end of year".

    BalasHapus
  2. if you use to be ( is, am, are) don't use past tense verb you can use to be ( was were). example: the dance is danced on top of a gong...... ( the dance was danced on top of......)

    BalasHapus
  3. I think you have to pay attention to your paragraph like capitalization and small letters . For example for city names , the name of the tribe , and others. Once again, do not forget to edit your step especially in step 1 and 2 to justify .

    BalasHapus