Definition Paragraph
is about “Gong Dance”
Step 1
11.
Ledo Kancet dance
or dance Gong
is one of the Dayak
traditional dances and dance also dance
Gong is expressing
about the tenderness of a woman.
22.
Dance Gong comes from East Kalimantan.
33.
Gong dance is very popular in Kalimantan,
because dance is often performed at
traditional events or other
events, but it also makes the popular clothes or tools used are very different
that using a material made from animals such as necklaces made of manik-
colored beads and teeth or fangs Tiger.
Step 2
Topic Sentence:
Dance Kancet Ledo also called dance Gong is one of the
artistic expression of the dayak people who inhabit the East Kalimantan.
Supporting Sentence:
1. Dance gong is an expression of tenderness woman
-This dance reveals the beauty, intelligence and gentle and dance movements in accordance
1. Dance gong is an expression of tenderness woman
-This dance reveals the beauty, intelligence and gentle and dance movements in accordance
with the name of the dance, the
dance is danced on top of a Gong with gentle movement
and the full balance Sapeq
accompanied by musical instruments.
2. Dancers Gong use beaded dress shirt and Taah form.
-It is typical female clothing consisting of velvet fabric decorated with beads, which are
2. Dancers Gong use beaded dress shirt and Taah form.
-It is typical female clothing consisting of velvet fabric decorated with beads, which are
used in a manner wrapped around
the waist, which each end of the rope is wound and
stopped at the navel and other
equipment used Lavung and necklaces made of manik
colored beads and teeth or fangs
Tiger, and hornbill feathers are worn on both hands
dancer.
3. Simplicity dance Gong seen in motion and music.
-Motion on the dance Gong just a few segments of the body are moving, as well as the form
3. Simplicity dance Gong seen in motion and music.
-Motion on the dance Gong just a few segments of the body are moving, as well as the form
of repetitive movements when the
dancer towards Gong, while on and off of Gong Gong
and Gong Dance also has a simple
footwork in stride and swing the body and gentle hand.
4. The costumes used very luxurious.
- That arena is made of beads strung into a motive - a motive animals like motif necklace
4. The costumes used very luxurious.
- That arena is made of beads strung into a motive - a motive animals like motif necklace
pattern Aso music game that
supports this dance accompaniment flat is not a change from
the beginning to the end of the
dance.
Concluding Sentence:
In cloncluding,
Tari Gong is a dance that reflects
the softness of a woman and also have beauty and intelligence.
Step 3
First Draf
Gong Dance
Dance Kancet
Ledo also called dance Gong is one of the artistic expression of the dayak people who
inhabit the east Kalimantan. Dance gong be
an expression of tenderness woman. This dance reveals the beauty, intelligence
and gentle and dance movements in accordance with the name of the dance, the
dance is danced on top of a gong with gentle movement and the full balance Sapeq accompanied by musical instruments. Dancer gong use beaded dress shirt and taah form. It is typical clothes of women consisting of velvet fabric decorated
with beads, which are used in a manner wrapped around the waist, which each end
of the rope is wound and stopped at the navel and other equipment used lavung and necklaces made of beads colored and teeth or fangs tiger, and
hornbill feathers are worn on both dencer hands. Simplicity dance gong seen
in motion and music. Dance gong movement
in only a few segments
of the body are moving, as well as the form
of repetitive movements when the dancer towards
gong, while
on and off of gong, gong dance also
has a simple footwork
in stride and
swing the body and
hands gentle. Costumes
used very luxurious. That arena is made of beads
strung into a motive
- a motive animals
like motif necklace pattern aso music game that
supports this dance accompaniment flat is
not a change from the beginning
to the end of the dance.
In
cloncluding, Tari Gong is a dance that reflects
the softness of a woman and also have beauty and intelligence.
Note:
Gong : is one of the traditional musical instrument
Dayak Kalimantan art
Sapeq : is a musical instrument that is plucked like a harp
Taah : It is a typical female clothing consisting of velvet decorated beads
Lavung : is a hat made of rattan and there are motifs in accordance with style
Sapeq : is a musical instrument that is plucked like a harp
Taah : It is a typical female clothing consisting of velvet decorated beads
Lavung : is a hat made of rattan and there are motifs in accordance with style
clothes and Taah
Aso necklace : is a necklace made of materials of a dog or dragon
Aso necklace : is a necklace made of materials of a dog or dragon
beaded : is a glittering beads
jewelry that adorn the costume
I think it be better if you add a statement "When is the time usually are people there showing this dance ?" For example : "This dance usually shows every end of year".
BalasHapusif you use to be ( is, am, are) don't use past tense verb you can use to be ( was were). example: the dance is danced on top of a gong...... ( the dance was danced on top of......)
BalasHapusI think you have to pay attention to your paragraph like capitalization and small letters . For example for city names , the name of the tribe , and others. Once again, do not forget to edit your step especially in step 1 and 2 to justify .
BalasHapus